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Short Space Poem

posted by starjello on poetry

Dark with spots of light,

vast domain to be explored.

May we go soon, please?

Dark with spots of light, vast domain to be explored. May we go soon, please?

6 comments

[–] E-werd 2 points (+2|-0)

Almost a haiku.

[–] jobes 1 points (+1|-0)

Oh man this is a huge haiku cockblock just leaving out that one sylabol.

[–] starjello [OP] 1 points (+1|-0)

I made a mistake, but I possibly fixed it.

[–] jobes 1 points (+1|-0)

You fixed it lol

[–] starjello [OP] 0 points (+0|-0)

I fixed it, probably.